Today in Japan, many buildings and public areas have a lot of lights for decoration, such as the lights used during Christmas. Do you think this is a good idea?
POINTS
●Safety
●The environment
●Tourism
この課題に対してテンプレートを使用すると以下になります。
赤字がテンプレートの部分になります。
I think that a lot of decoration in buildings and public areas is a quite good idea for the following two reasons.
First, that is good for safety. Some studies suggested that a lot of lights can prevent crime at night. Therefore, this will lead to a safe society.
Second, light decorations are good for local tourism. Illumination can attract a lot of tourists. As a result, it will stimulate the local economy.
For the two reasons mentioned above, I believe having lights for decoration is beneficial for our society and quite a good idea.
Some people say that 自分の意見の反対. However I think that 自分の意見 for the following three reasons.
Main Body1
The first reason is that 〜.
Main Body2
The second reason is that 〜.
Conclusion
For the two reasons mentioned above, I think we can say with confidence that 自分の意見(結論).
テンプレート
このテンプレートのポイントは3つ
冒頭で自分の反対意見を書く
The first reason is that S Vを使う
結論でI think we can say with confidence that~と書く
1. 冒頭で自分の反対意見を書く
イントロダクションで、Some people say that 自分の意見の反対. However I think that 自分の意見 for the following three reasons.から始めます。
〇〇と言う人はいるが、私は□□です。という書き出し。
これは自然な英語です。
これを使うだけで確実に+10語くらいになります。
反対意見が冒頭に加わるので語数が増えるのは当たりまえですね。
2. The first reason is that S Vを使う
Main bodyでThe first reason is that S Vを使うと、それだけで少なくとも4語追加されます。
The second reason is that S Vも加わるのでトータルで少なくとも8語増えます。
この表現も自然な英語なので違和感はありません。
3. 結論でI think we can say with confidence that~と書く
Conclusionの部分のI think we can say with confidence that~の部分ですが、confidenceは自信という意味。
つまり「~であると私たちは自信を持って言えると思います。」という意味の文章です。
まどろっこしく見えますが、非常に自然な英文です。
このテンプレートを使えば、語数は大幅に増えます。
私はこのテンプレートで英検1級に合格しています。
最初に書いた英作文を書き替えると以下のようになります。
Some people say that decoration in building is harmful to our society. However, I think that a lot of decoration in buildings and public areas is a quite good idea for the following two reasons.
The first reason is that decoration is good for safety. Some studies suggested that a lot of lights can prevent crime at night. Thus, this will lead to a safe society.
The Second reasons is that light decorations are good for local tourism. Illumination can attract a lot of tourists. As a result, it will stimulate the local economy.
For the two reasons mentioned above, I think we can say with confidence that having lights for decoration is beneficial for our society and quite a good idea.